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November 23rd, 2011, 6:53 am

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Reply Nocturnal-biatch, November 23rd, 2011, 11:43 am

Alright I understand that Hydra's a beginner but this sprite of him is C-R-A-P.

Reply Hydra, November 23rd, 2011, 7:46 pm

@Nocturnal-biatch: hey i just got a mecha shadow sprite and recolored it i couldn't be bothered editing it

Reply Draven22, November 23rd, 2011, 7:47 pm

so noone is gonna comment on the post itself? like "hey man this was funny" or "since when did helena read books?"

Reply Hydra, November 23rd, 2011, 7:50 pm

@Draven22: and he can talk right now just look at his avitar god and they say electro looks bad

Reply Draven22, November 23rd, 2011, 7:52 pm

@Hydra: ...TSP what were you thinking..
(TSP: HEY USING TELEPETHY, DRAVEN TO ANSWER YOUR QUESTION, I KNOW HE CAN HANDLE IT)
...whatever you say...

CRITQUE NOW!

Reply Hydra, November 23rd, 2011, 7:53 pm

@Draven22: huh what

Reply Draven22, November 23rd, 2011, 7:55 pm

@Hydra: TALK..ABOUT..COMIC (PRESSURE RELEASES ARCHANGLE)
NOW!

Reply Hydra, November 23rd, 2011, 7:56 pm

@Draven22: yeah maybe we should get out of here oh wait i'm asleep *snoring*

Reply Draven22, November 23rd, 2011, 7:59 pm

@Hydra: *ARCHANGLE USES LIGHT MAGIC* WAKE UP AND COMMENT ON THE COMIC ON WHAT YOU LIKED AND HATED

Helena: daddy is scary now...Mr. Electro, please comment to calm daddy

Reply Hydra, November 23rd, 2011, 8:04 pm

@Draven22: *yawn* ha wa oh what oh bianca you should stay out of this or we'll BOTH be in trouble
yeah zain you should get a lock for your room that's what i did for my baby brother
but yeah good comic but we should really get out of that castle wait where's melody?

Reply Draven22, November 23rd, 2011, 8:06 pm

@Hydra: *rage ceases* much better, and if i'm right looking for us...but TSP had something planned so i'll wait

Reply Hydra, November 23rd, 2011, 8:08 pm

@Draven22: Ok? should we be worried oh right for the school in the future if we go there it will just be the school background with holes, fire and dimmed lights

Reply Nocturnal-biatch, November 24th, 2011, 1:34 pm

@Hydra: My avie is a joke to all eye burning recolours. Such as yours.

Reply Hydra, November 25th, 2011, 12:21 am

@Nocturnal-biatch: well what colors would you suggest for Electro

Reply TeamSonicPrez, November 27th, 2011, 7:34 pm

@Draven22: I do?

Reply Draven22, November 27th, 2011, 7:34 pm

@TeamSonicPrez: huh?

Reply 321TaTer, December 9th, 2011, 11:55 am

@Draven22: And you said you use good grammar in comics. :P

Reply Draven22, December 9th, 2011, 11:57 am

@321TaTer: Back off you runt

Reply 321TaTer, December 9th, 2011, 12:23 pm

@Draven22: I'm so offended!

Reply Draven22, December 9th, 2011, 1:24 pm

@321TaTer: get out

Reply 321TaTer, December 9th, 2011, 2:19 pm

@Draven22: I'ma sit right here. :3

Reply Draven22, December 9th, 2011, 2:21 pm

@321TaTer: or i can use explosion, and blow you out of here

Reply 321TaTer, December 9th, 2011, 2:29 pm

@Draven22: Pffffffffffffffffffffft

Reply Draven22, December 9th, 2011, 2:30 pm

@321TaTer: you may be a kirby, but i know how to use a dragoons powers

Reply 321TaTer, December 9th, 2011, 3:00 pm

@Draven22: I'm not a kirby. I'm a Kirby.

Reply Draven22, December 9th, 2011, 3:06 pm

@321TaTer: i don't give a damn what you are, i have the power of a dragon and can make you expload

Reply DryKirby64, December 9th, 2011, 5:57 pm

@Draven22: I'm sure TaTer could use a load of exp.

Besides, we Kirbies can eat anything. Even hedgehogs.

Reply Draven22, December 9th, 2011, 6:00 pm

@DryKirby64: please! a person in dragoon form gets all of their stats put to the persons max! plus you have to be kinda strong to get a dragoon spirit in the first place, as well as the fact that a dragoon gets a huge defense boost. matter of fact the only weapon that can technically kill a dragoon in dragoon form in one blow is the dragon buster blade, and no one has one of those except maybe a wingly.

Reply DryKirby64, December 9th, 2011, 6:49 pm

@Draven22: Meh, I'll stop the argument and give you some constructive criticism: More personality. The girl is a stereotypical 5-year old, and the father, I don't really like here. Maybe have him be a bit sad and worried, as well as angry.

Change the sprites to show their personality too. If the girl's a bit shy, maybe have her wear a hat to cover up her face. If she's popular, maybe have her wear makeup and all that.

Also, this might come off a bit harsh, but, learn to spell. I hardly understood what they were saying here.

Reply Draven22, December 9th, 2011, 6:52 pm

@DryKirby64: first, i didn't make the girls sprite, second my keyboard sticks ALOT, third old sprite, kinda working on it,

Reply DryKirby64, December 9th, 2011, 9:54 pm

@Draven22: Okay. No hard feelings.

Reply 321TaTer, December 10th, 2011, 9:17 am

@Draven22: *Overused excuse of the century*

Reply Draven22, December 10th, 2011, 9:18 am

@321TaTer: leave now.

Reply 321TaTer, December 10th, 2011, 9:37 am

@Draven22: NEE HAW

Reply Draven22, December 10th, 2011, 9:48 am

@321TaTer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gb82cyACvxU&feature=relmfu

i'm the dragoon and dragon, you are the cactus/bird thing

Reply Jesus the hedgehog, December 10th, 2011, 9:52 am

OHHHHH AND I AM DANTE!

Reply 321TaTer, December 10th, 2011, 9:54 am

@Draven22: Lol you pretend to be a GodMod. :P

Reply Draven22, December 10th, 2011, 9:55 am

@321TaTer: that is a legitamite spell

Reply Jesus the hedgehog, December 10th, 2011, 9:57 am

AND NOW I SHOOT YOU WITH MY GUN

BAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAM

Reply 321TaTer, December 10th, 2011, 9:59 am

@Draven22: Then I guess it's okay to eat you in one attack!

*Inhales you*

Reply Draven22, December 10th, 2011, 10:00 am

@Jesus the hedgehog: dragoon armor FTW....jeez if you didn't go dragoon in the boss fights, you were usually up a creek...especailly when your opponent could also go dragoon...or was a dragon...

Reply Jesus the hedgehog, December 10th, 2011, 10:01 am

@Draven22: GRRRRRRR DEVIL TRIGGER AAAAAAAH

*kills you*

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